revisions

So i have started my revisions after getting away from my paper for a few days and I felt like those few days helped me greatly in figuring out what I want to change and know how i want to change it. Fridays assignment also helped me because in writing down why I was comparing this and that and how i wanted the comparison to show i came to a conclusion helped me with figuring out all my other ideas. anyway so I am continuing to have trouble with summaries instead of framing. Well thats all I have to say about the revisions