Revision Process

I think the revision process is hard, I always want/expect my paper to be perfect the first time around. Then there is always so much editing and deleting that needs to happen before its a finished project. I find that to be the most frustrating, and with this paper I feel like it is harder than others I have had to revise simply because it is something that I am not familiar with so the revision process is a little more difficult. I find being "critical" somewhat harder than I thought, I want all of my sources to work and I want all of them to be useful, but I know that is not the case. I am trying to find the ideas that best support my paper and use those to better educate the reader as well as trying to sift through the bad ones that may confuse my readers and make things unclear. Since Sunday and today, I have actually added some bits about the new health care plan that Obama has passed, things like how it may affects those that are in treatment right now, and what it may be able to do for those that will need treatment in the future. Another thing I feel I have accomplished is finding more sources that better help my paper, they kind of replace the sources that I took out because like I said earlier were confusing.