Punk is Passe

After reading this paper for our assignment I actually felt releaved about the possible freedoms and opportunities we can use in our own papers. The language spoken was what mostly got me and made me want to keep reading, it was true with virtually no distraction and didn't seem as if anything was being forced on the reader so I was more able to connect and understand him because of his use of language so similiar to mine; he displayed lots of confidence to his personality and emotion towards his subject which got me thinking about revisions I would like to make on my rough draft now and how I might improve in these areas. This essay gave some ideas and directions to go so I feel a little at ease about my revision process now