A new outlook an different blogs

For me, this is the first time I've ever had to blog and so it's kind of new to me because I don't really know what to write about sometimes. Looking at those other blogs on Michael Shanks website I could see that they put a little more time and effort into certain topics and his categories in which were discussed. What I mean by putting more effort into it was the fact that he covered many different discussions and they were relatively shorter. What I liked the best about his blogs was that they were short and to the point. I hate reading long blogs that get to one point and keep going on about a pointless story when a topic could be covered in a short paragraph. I hate readings those long stories trying to cover certain topic, and then it goes into different points of views, and different sides, when it's not even needed. I looked at some other "amateur" blogs that I just found on Google ( not the website provided in the e-mail) and after trying to read through some I ended up just skimming because they were just boring. To me, I relate a blog to a newspaper because looking at a newspaper I feel that I only read some of the articles that are short and to the point, and also the ones with a "catchy" title or a title that seems interesting to me. I feel a blog is similar to that because it seems looking at everyone's post I only read the short ones that look interesting to me. Anyone else? I bet not a lot of people are going to comment on my post because I'm sure not a lot of people are going to take the time to read through the whole thing, if at all. I have a hard time just coming up with something to say on this blog even though we can write about anything. I do enjoy reading some of the little jokes and everything everyone includes though.

Next I would like to explain in a little post about what I'm trying to improve with my essay. I missed class on friday so I didn't get my essay back yet with some feedback, but I feel that I already know what I need to do. Academic Inquiry in my opinion is blatantly giving your opinion. That is what I need to work on! Pretty simple but we will see I guess when I get it back.