Presentation

After taking a good look at the course goals that deal with presentation, I think one of the main factors is that we need to stick to the idea of our controlling purpose. When writing a paper this length I feel it can be very easy to vere off in directions that one did not intend to. Our papers need to be presented in a clear and understandable manner and needs to stick to the point. One of the course goals states it very clearly, "reader's needs for coherence, clarity, and a thoughtful response to what matters." I think that we as the authors really need to focus and stick to these ideas. AS far as the "packaging" goes, I do not feel it is necessary to go over the top. You want to make sure it is neat, proffessional and presentable but adding color and those sort of things, I feel can really take away from the actual script.