Revision

My revision is a work in progress, I know which direction I plan I heading and have been going in that direction, but I always somehow seem to get sidetracked with new ideas and innovations. This has been a busy week so far for me so my revisions haven't progressed much since sunday; just new ideas. My main focus within my paper is the idea of obesity as a "stigma" and why certain sources seem to think it is and why others do not. I will also focus on why people are so obsessed with the "perfect" image and having the "perfect" body. Relating the two contrasts has proven to be difficult for me in that I can not find a smooth transition. I'm sure it will all come together though.