Revision

Am having a hard time in it because I should make it a good one so I can be able to pass the portfolio.Being critical meaning to add value to show something important that one can trust and also analyze it using my thinking and ideas that’s what means to be critical. In some of my quotes I needed to explain them more in detail and analyze them "If parents smoke, teens have more access to cigarettes than teens who have non-smoking parents” (Science Daily) this one for example , in my paper I didn’t go through it very well even though this quote is easy to understand but I need to link it with the way I think.Between Sunday and Tuesday I kept revising it to make changes to It because I need many changes in my parts , the ideas and the sequence of them are good in my opinion but I need more of a push so I can be confident that am able to pass the portfolio.The word presentation means what our eyes see on the paper from the font size , color and sequence of the paragraphs , for me am trying to make it as simple as possible that doesn’t annoy who reads it.