Yesterday I spent a massive amount of time revising my paper even though revision was not due. It occurred to me that we only have a few weeks left and I need to get going on really nailing my controlling purpose and connecting and analyzing my sources. In doing this I completely eliminated some sources that seemed useless. I deleted a lot of awkward paragraphs that threw off the direction of my paper. I focused on analyzing two things rather than a bunch of things. This made my paper flow better. I still need to do some work on my conclusion. Also I need to revise my research analysis essay.
- ps the beach was great today. i love warm weather
-macy malin
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