Looks likes our class isn't as bad as Adam expected! I think it is funny that our class did well on our research papers because we not always ready to learn and we get off track so easily.
With that being said I am satisfied with the comments that I received on my paper. I need to make my critical analysis more clear. "stereotype threat" is a key term that brings my papers conclusion and critical analysis together. My paper hinted that stereotype threat could be the reasons for African American athletic dominance, but I need to bluntly express this somewhere in my research.
I have not enjoyed the stress that this paper has put on me, but I do like to acknowledge all of the work I have put into it. I like flipping through a thick thirteen page research paper and know that I wrote all of it, and that I am almost finished. Also, learning and gaining new incite on this subject is fun too. I was naive and narrow minded to it before, and now I can safely say that I have found information new to me and hopefully the authors I have critiqued.
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