positives and negatives

when i got my feedback back i was both disheartened and happy to see what adam had written. He wrote that alot of my middle portion had little to do with my main controlling purpose. I guess i should have seen that coming because i was even thinking that while i was reading it. But the good thing about this is that it gives me more to write about. I was trying to get to 10 pages by bsing my way through but now i actually have something substantial to write about. Overall i think my paper is going going pretty good. I guess we will just have to wait and see what the teachers think now