Need more..

I agree that the fourth course goal is important obviously since that is really the only thing the reviewers reading our work are looking for. I guess I can see why that is important, but I feel that I really do meet the goal in my essay, pulling in different sources for my main topic. It kind of sucks getting your paper back and it saying "Good, but needs for of the fourth course goal" at the top. There were no examples of what I could do better or anything, and so I guess I'm not having trouble of what I should do to "improve it" when there was no examples of how to do it.