Revision

I'm finally going to start revising my paper. Sure it probably was not a good idea to wait this long but i was having way too much fun over spring break to work on it. After the discussions in class about critical inquiry i realized i could elaborate on some of my ideas that were previously undeveloped. With this revision and others my paper should meet the 10 page requirement, if i pass it or not obviously remains to be seen but i feel pretty good about how its all coming together.