Response to the Sample Research Essay

Like some people, reading this sample essay gave me a better understanding of how I should write my paper. I like how it's always in the first person's point of view because that builds a relationship between the reader and writer (so call "having a closer bond). Also, when reading this paper, I appreciate how it was simple, yet it contains many interesting points/facts that the reader found. I feel more confident about my writings because of some of the simple qualities, but yet, because of the information that this paper had, I can assure that I would have to do major research in order to produce a good paper! I see what it takes to pass this class! :)