Paper progress

I finally feel like my paper is starting to shape up. I was having a tough time getting enough information to close out what i was trying to say, but with the help of the comments written on my second draft i feel like I'm making progress. I cant wait until this class is done and summer is here.

Shanks

1. Shanks did a very nice job of academic inquiry in his blogs. I like the fact that his blogs weren't solely paragraphs of just writing, but rather he put links to interesting pictures. It is a very professional blog compared to a lot of blogs found on the internet.

2. I found a second blog that really caught my attention because it is related to music. The sight is musicbyday.com. It is a bunch of entries of album reviews by people, and song reviews. It seems like a good way to find more out about an album without buying it first and finding out the hard way. This blog is definitely not as professional and academic as Shanks blog, however it is meant solely for fun, and not educational purposes.

3. My spring break was extremely boring. I worked about 8 hours per day at my landscaping job cutting down trees. If anything i was more tired after my spring break was over than before i left for spring break. I did fit some time in to hang with some buddies though, and visit their college.

English 102

So i had conference swimming meet for school this past week and we won. Unfortunately it meant missing a week of school. Im very behind on all my school work and feeling pretty stressed out right now. Hopefully i can catch back up quickly. So yeah this is my blog for the week.

English 102

My topic is about radical religion and terrorism. I want to look into what has changed in many radical religions that has made violence and terrorism such an issue in current society. Are there any other interesting things I could possibly expand on?

my topic

ok don't think of me as crazy lol but I want to write about serial killers. Seriously like the mind thought they have is obv messed up. I'm trying to really look into why and what triggers them to do these actions.