When revising my essay I had a lot of things to work on. I felt that I had somewhat met the course goals, but my paper was choppy and unorganized.
I first thought of all the thins that went on in my weekend, and I tried to think of things that happened or I experienced when growing up to get better insight on my topic. I correlated experiences such as the NCAA tournament pre-game show within my paper, I tried to stay open minded to learning new point of view because that is how my dad has always tried teaching us to be.
I ended up reorganizing my paper and copy and pasting paragraphs in different places, and adding new information that showed that I am opened minded and willing to learn while at the same time being critical.
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